Thursday, 5 September 2013

Editing ping-pong

Editing a book is like jumping a clear round
When I sent my editor my final version of The Intrepid Pony Escapes having pruned 60 pages out I  thought he would put in some comma's, tweak the grammar and cut out some boring sentences. Far from it. He's asked for character descriptions and improved the text by moving parts of paragraphs around. He has asked questions about the plot where the action is unclear, and made helpful suggestions to clarify things. He was even worried that my protagonist was bullying one of the girls as it put her in a bad light. As bullying is key to the book I had to explain that she only realises she has been bullying when a friend is bullied and has to decide if she wants revenge that badly. I personally don't want my protagonist to be a goody-goody as there is good and bad, kind and selfishness in everyone.
The good news is I am halfway through reading the final edit and know the book has improved through the process. the bad news is I will have to go through this all again to read the new amendments to the document. Does it ever end? When will I get to the point where Tony and I agree no more can be done? I want to see this book in print, but I long for it to be the best version it could be. Maybe we will finish soon.
Editing a book is like jumping a clear round in a show jumping competition. You do what you think is a perfect round but then have do it all again in the jump off over higher fences. However long the process takes I'm glad the books being edited, as  the final product should be a work to be proud of.
Thanks Tony, keep on editing!

Thursday, 29 August 2013

Francis Wait answers Twenty Questions.


Francis Wait
Francis Wait
Francis is author of The Survivalists – Getting There which is being launched on Friday 6th September. You can find this book on www.franciswait.com/ Francis has already had two of his intriguing short stories published as one of nine authors calling themselves ‘The We’re Not Dead Yet Writers’ in the much praised ‘Twists in the Tales’ (available on Amazon or through http://www.fantasyadventurebooks.com/).
1 When did you first start writing? I always wanted to write from an early age, and started when I was twenty but my writing was all in longhand and I wasn’t very successful.
 
2 How did you come to write your first book? I purchased a computer in 1995 and ideas I that had been floating around in my head suddenly became possible to get down on paper easily and quickly along with editing and changing the story line.

3 What’s the best thing about being an author? I like the power I have over the story line, if someone I speak to gives me another insight into a character I might change it to make the tale better, or I can do it myself if I wish.

4 And what’s the worst? The worst has to be editing, especially quotation marks. I had to take lessons on how to place them with the correct stops or commas.

5 Which was your favourite book as a child? I have no special book that was my favourite, but I liked the Biggles books when I was a child.

6 What do writers groups offer? Writers groups offer so much to budding writers with gentle criticism or praise it help them. Although I have both face book and twitter, I don’t tend to use them much.

7 Tell us about you working experience I have had several jobs, I worked as a storeman in an off licence, a re-upholsterer, I worked as a plasterer for most of my life and latterly as a builder. I was in the army in the 60’s for two years on National Service. I worked in Belgium for ten years and at that time I worked in France and Holland. In between I did several professions too numerous to mention. I did anything to bring money into my house to support my family.

8 Have you ever had an embarrassing moment?  Yes, many times. Probably the worst was when I was 17 and got caught in a garden shed with a girl, by her father.

9 What do writers need most? Experience; nothing can replace that. I use many of my life’s experiences in my books.

10 What are you reading at the moment? Books by an author called William Stuart Long, although I suspect he is probably a woman.

11 Who is your writing hero? My writing hero is Wilbur Smith, I think his books are the best read that I have ever had.

12 What did you want to be when you were twelve? When I was twelve I wanted to be a tennis star. I was quite proficient at it, but at that time it was quite a snobby pastime and I came from the wrong side of the tracks. Also there was no money in it as it was all amateur.

13 What is your proudest achievement? I gave up smoking about 25 years ago. I was on about 40 a day then. I bought my first brand new van with the money I saved.

14 What would you like to see happen in the future? There are too many to list here. My top desires would be to see immigration stopped, and make all immigrants pay for two years into the NHS before qualifying for free medical treatment. I’d like golden pensions to civil servants to cease. I’d ban all foreign aid to despots who buy 747’s to travel in and siphon off the money into private bank accounts.

15 What are your fondest memories? My fondest memories are going to my uncle’s farm for the summer holidays; I helped gather the harvest on hay wagons, milked cows and worked all summer. There is no greater pleasure than going down to the hen house in the morning and bringing back eggs for breakfast.

16 What do you think of other writers and authors? I like other authors and writers because they have a great deal of expertise in their chosen profession. I like their imagination and dedication in what is probably one of the poorest paid pastimes to have, yet they rarely give up.

17 Tell us about your hobbies away from writing. I live in sheltered housing where I organise entertainment for the other residents. I also try in my daily life to help as many people as I can.

18 Where do you hope to be when you’re 70? LOL. I’m 74 now. I want to be a really successful writer ASAP although time goes on.

19 What was your dream holiday? My dream holiday was a month in Australia marred by the fact that I was prosecuted for importing fruit into the country. Full story is in my book with changed characters.

20 What superpower would you like to have? I would like to have the superpower to change the world to make it a better place, but that would require too many different powers so it would be impossible.

 

 

Thursday, 22 August 2013

Back to writing about ponies


The intrepid pony rests after a jumping session
After fun cruising the waterways and blogging it's back to other forms of writing. While I am waiting for Tony Flood my editor (also author of my life with the stars) to finish the professional edit I am working on book 2 of the intrepid pony series.
Last year I joined several writing groups where I met with writers and heard talks and did workshops and they were so fruitful that I'm renewing membership this year. Thanks to them my writing has matured and improved and I hope it will continue to do so this year. On line author friends are great and have recommended useful websites but nothing beats face to face discussions with helpful club members.
tail washing is hard work- for the owner
Soon I will be interviewing writers about their experiences and posting them on this blog. hopefully every two to three weeks. I will also track the progress of my book as it heads into the great world outside. When I set off on that journey I had no idea how much work went into publishing and have still got loads to learn. Then there's the small matter of promoting my book. Having attained the target of writing a novel the promotional mountain seems huge, but others have led the way.

Sunday, 18 August 2013

Restormel Castle



Perfect circular curtain wall
The inner walls
The day of our departure we decided to visit Restormel castle with a picnic as it was nearer Devon, cutting half an hour off our journey home later. It was a hit with the grandchildren as they hadn’t been to a castle before. A couple of older children played on the grass with toy swords pretending to be knights. in spite of the high season the castle didn't have too many visitors. I guess holiday makers were mostly on the beaches soaking up the sun. 
upper walkway
The castle had a round keep with a circular walkway high in the ramparts. The girls made a beeline for the upper walkway even though the steps were huge to the 2 year old. We explored the roofless rooms and a narrow passage half way up but the girls returned to the upper level again and again and again. After locally made ice creams we said our goodbyes in the car park and set out for home. They should sleep well tonight.
Up and down
When we looked at our previous photos of the castle we found the upper walkway had been out of bounds. At some point English Heritage had put in safety railings a wooden access steps and made the upper walkway safe without spoiling this lovely ruin. I'm so glad they did as the children loved that aspect of the castle and the views from the top are wonderful.

Saturday, 17 August 2013

War time bomb explodes


On our penultimate morning our daughter prepared a picnic and we set off for the beach. There was no space in the car park and it was too hot to wait around with the dog and children so she led the way to a village green to eat the picnic. I asked a passing cyclist for directions to the nearest park and we ended up driving past a parked police car to the far side of the village where there was a superb playground with unusual play equipment. The children enjoyed the picnic and made the most of the park. As we were preparing to leave there was a mighty bang which echoed heavily round the valley.
surf

“Thunder?” I asked.

“Oh that will be the bomb,” my daughter replied casually. That night the safe detonation of an old war time bomb featured in the local news. I had to smile, fancy heading for a village with an unexploded bomb for a picnic with 3 under 4's. The report explained this was the site of a war time air force base which had been heavily bombed for weeks so there could be more bombs still undetected in this sleepy village.
sandy beaches
The beach car park was still full but people were leaving when we returned and we managed to park. The grandchildren waited patiently while we blew up our small boat and then we trekked down the beach lugging boat, dog and trying to keep an eye on two grandchildren clad in wetsuits and life jackets as they wandered in different directions at varying speeds.

The boat was a success as the children hadn’t been in one before although used to the beach. Paul and I took turns in floating the boat before the waves, giving the girls a rough water ride. Lottie wanted to go out in the boat but was kept away from the action. Rubber boat and sharp claws don’t go well together.

Friday, 16 August 2013

Newquay and Truro


Rocky cliffs
After the cruise we booked a hotel in Newquay to visit our daughter and grandchildren. Paul bent over and hurt his back so we won’t be visiting the boat in the near future, but we set out for the town with 11 magnificent beaches as the hotel was paid for. The first day we drove down taking several diversions as the traffic was gridlocked and survived torrential downpours in Devon. It was during that deluge that we realised we had left our waterproofs on the boat and had no coats whatsoever. The heat wave had lulled us into setting out without an umbrella too. However the sun emerged by the time we reached Cornwall. As always our grandchildren gave us an enthusiastic welcome making us delighted just to be there. Later we arrived at the Headlands Hotel to a warm welcome, complimentary champagne, and preparations for an international surf competition which would commence as we leave. In spite of the bustle the hotel was calm and relaxed inside.



Headland near Bedruthan
Next morning I walked Lottie past the newly erected marquees along Fistral Beach where she let off steam. We had breakfast with Lottie in the lounge overlooking the beach. The Headland is the perfect dog friendly hotel, relaxed, friendly with historic features.
Our trip out today was to the Truro, a tiny city with an impressive cathedral, to buy a pink bike for a nearly 4 year old. She came away with a big smile having tried out several pink models but the bike won’t arrive until we have returned home.
Truro
Truro Cathedral
Our evening dinner was a complimentary 3 course dinner which came as a freebee when Paul booked. Fortunately his back is improving swiftly as he does his back strengthening exercises.


Thursday, 15 August 2013

Fradley Junction


on the river section

Alrewas Lock
Moorings at Fradley
Cool weather greeted us with rain threatening so we set out promptly. We passed the super slow boat moored up and headed for the river section. The rain fell as gentle mist and cleared up as we reached Fradley. The locks here are tricky to operate as they have minds of their own and various gates open at random. At one lock I closed one gate then the self opening one and Paul reversed the boat back to keep it shut while I ran to the far end to let the water in. We moored up at the visitor mooring in the middle of the flight. It is a good place for boat watching as there is always a lot happening there as the Trent and Mersey canal meets the Coventry canal in the middle of the flight of locks overlooked by a handy pub.  

By the time we had eaten lunch the sun was blazing but Paul had moored in the shade. Eventually we set out on the final set of locks back to base. They were busy but the queue was moving slickly. We returned to the marina in sun and again found it a beautiful place to moor. While Paul was busy hoovering I walked Lottie (who hates the noise) round the marina and found it had lovely carvings of dragonflies on the green spaces. We spent the afternoon cleaning and tidying the boat for our next voyage, whenever that may be.