Saturday, 22 February 2014

Local News

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Mum wins battle with dyslexia to write novel

By East Grinstead Courier and Observer  |  Posted: February 19, 2014
By Lisa Boardman
  • WRITE AND WRONG: Lynne Hale, who was told she was "lazy" at school
  • because she had dyslexia, has published her first book
  • WRITE AND WRONG: Lynne Hale, who was told she was "lazy" at school because she has dyslexia, has published her first book Photo by Grant Melton
  • WRITE AND WRONG: Lynne Hale, who was told she was "lazy" at school because she had dyslexia, has published her first book
  •        A DYSLEXIC woman who was told she was "useless" by her schoolteachers has just published her first book.
Lynne Hale, was constantly reprimanded at school for being "lazy" as she found reading and writing a struggle because of her condition.
But the determined author is now celebrating the completion of her first book – The Intrepid Pony Escapes – which is published next month.
Mrs Hale, who also suffers from a co-ordination condition called dyspraxia, says her learning difficulties were left undiagnosed.
She explained: "I just couldn't understand how some children could do things that I couldn't.
"I remember sitting in school writing as hard as I could and only handing in two pages when everyone else handed in six. I was like 'how did that happen? Why?'
"I had grief from my teachers all the time and, to be honest, writing a book was the last thing I wanted to do."
In 2000 Lynne suffered a terrifying fall in Weymouth where she plunged 12ft onto rocks, and she decided to write about her life for her children.
She explained: "I was on a level sheet of rock at car park level when my foot slipped and I slid sideways into a 12-foot-deep gully. After being rescued by helicopter I decided I would write things down for my family to remember.
Although my neck landed between two sharp rocks I escaped with only a broken arm as my handbag had slid behind my neck. My young daughter later said it was as if an angel placed it there as without it my neck would have broken.
I started writing immediately but with a busy job and children my progress was slow."
Between writing, Lynne enjoyed her role as a teaching assistant for a school in Chiddingly, Lewes, but was made redundant in the summer of 2012 .
She used her redundancy money to fund the novel.
"I loved my job – I could really relate to those children who found things difficult," she said.
"But the redundancy money gave me the opportunity to write my novel."
She added: "I first started riding when I was 11 and I have read many pony adventures over the years and I thought 'I could do better than that, I had better adventures on my pony' so I did."
Lynne has two daughters Sarah Lou, 30, and Chelle, 27, plus three grandchildren.
She lives with her husband Paul, a retired civil servant.
Lynne's book, published by Gibson Publishing, is being launched at The Bookshop, in East Grinstead High Street, on Saturday, March 1 at 11am.
The 210-page novel is aimed at young adults and describes some of Lynne's childhood adventures with her pony.


Saturday, 8 February 2014

Hands



Perfect nails and slender fingers lay pale on the crisp sheet. Still unmoving.

Maureen stroked the waxy skin and a tear trickled down her cheek. She dashed it away with her forefinger and prayed fervently. How easy it was to take things for granted – until they were snatched away.

The clock ticked remorselessly, one hour, two, three but still her careworn red hand caressed the bloodless white one. Nurses came and went, passed her cups of hot tea and biscuits but she kept her eyes fixed on the fragile limbs.

Suddenly the fingers twitched.
Maureen studied the heart monitor – how was she doing?

She stroked the white palm and the fingers closed around her thumb and squeezed.
“It’s all right darling,” Maureen soothed as tears rolled down her cheeks.

She slept fitfully but when she awoke the hand was no longer holding hers.
Anxiously she looked at the tiny figure on the bed.

“What happened,” the sleepy girl asked.
“You’ve been in a car accident. You’ve slept for days but you are going to be fine.”

Saturday, 18 January 2014

IS IT THAT LONG SINCE CHRISTMAS?


“More mince pies?”

“No,” Granddad sighs.

“They give me grief

And stick in my teeth.

Have you any

Candied jelly

Or some Yule log?”

“Oh that’s in the dog,

And the trifle is too –

But there’s plenty of Tiramisu.”

Wednesday, 1 January 2014

New year new game.

I'm learning about sales and promotions. The journey of a book from author via publisher and  printer through the distributer and out through the bookshops is complex.

Intrepid celebrating
I spent last year in two halves. First I rewrote The Intrepid Pony Escapes struggling with plots subplots and characters and then I spent six months working with an editor improving the plot, and polishing the grammar.  What a learning curve that was.
I have never been into selling. I have worked in a science laboratory and written scientific reports, I have worked as a carer in the community and I have assisted children in schools but never sold a thing. Well I have flogged the old baby equipment and a few toys but that is not the same as selling a book.
Where do I start? I have three venues lined up although the dates haven't been finalised but what if no one comes? I guess I can use the time to read one of the books I have sitting waiting, though perhaps that's not the image I should present to a potential book buyer.
Whatever happens at least I have a book I can be proud of. I am so glad I didn't rush to publish it as it changed tremendously through the editing, and all those nasty typo's were exterminated, or so I believe!
So this year is going to be an adventure. Somewhere out there are pony lovers who will enjoy my book and it will be super to meet one or two of them in the flesh. So as I start promoting my book I hope it escapes from the shelves and finds a cosy book case.

Friday, 20 December 2013

Christmas Nativity Play



C lad in white, the angel shouts a king is born today.  

Her halo slips as she points, you shepherds go that way.     

Rob shakes his head, no room here, you should have booked ahead.

I have a stable, John cries, you can share the cows bed.        

Silent Night the children sing. Mary sits down sighing.          

The manger slides on swiftly. Joseph knocks it flying.         

Mary pulls the swaddled doll from underneath her frock.    

And Joseph waves to his mother sat in the first block.         

Shepherds stumble forwards, fluffy lambs clutched in their hands.

Nat’s tee-towel hides his eyes; so on Joseph’s foot he stands.

As Mary lays the baby doll in the cardboard crib,

The injured Joseph shouts ouch! and pokes Nat in the rib.

In the Deep Mid Winter they sang, while the boys did fight.

Visitors from afar arrived wrapped in curtains bright.          

I bring Gold the first yelled, pushing Joseph out of sight.      

This is Frankenstein the next lisped, as his crown did fall.    

You need Myrrh Paul paused... for you are saviour of us all.

Paul then waved and called out; Mum I got it right today!    

Laughing, the audience wiped their happy tears away.           

Away in a manger, they sang, No crib for a bed.                 

Yes let the children come to me, Jesus softly said.                 
 

 

Sunday, 15 December 2013

Fabulous book cover

I love the cover for The Intrepid Pony escapes. This is clearly a Pony enjoying life to the full with no cares or worries.

His owner Zoe needs to follow his example and enjoy life more. But she is determined to get justice for Intrepid.

 

Instead of offering support, her new friend Shirley avoids her. What is Shirley hiding? As Zoe investigates further it becomes clear that the truth is being concealed.

It develops into a nightmare, with Zoe suffering rejection and isolation. Intrepid wins her new friends, but she makes a dangerous enemy in Lily, who delights in threatening and bullying her. As Zoe deals with each crisis a bigger one rears up.

                   Can she outwit Lily and discover Shirley’s secret?

 

Thursday, 12 December 2013

Why does everything come at the same time?




When I booked a mini break for my mother in Cornwall I had no idea that it would clash with proof reading my book before submitting it to the publisher. It was so hard to proofread with mum chatting away non stop. One week later I have proofread to the end of the Intrepid Pony Escapes for the 3rd time and found 40 punctuation mistakes. Why did I pay for an editor? Fortunately my publisher has been great about those last few typos that tried to crawl into the book.

However it is lovely to find my animal sketches being used to illustrate my book. On the whole I enjoyed the illustrating as enjoyable as the writing. That's why the next book to be published will be a children's picture book.

THANKS TONY FOR THE FOLLOWING GREAT REVIEW
BEING 16 is supposed to be about parties, friends and fun, but new author Lynne Hale reveals how life turns into a nightmare for her young heroine Zoe Stanton in her delightful first book The Intrepid Pony. Zoe's problems start when her beloved new pony Intrepid suffers a serious injury after being taken out of his field without permission.

Intrepid laughing
As she sets about finding the culprit, the persistent Zoe encounters rejection, unfairness, isolation, intimidation and bullying. She is hounded by her bitter rival Lily who attacks her both verbally and physically – and then attempts to place all the blame on Zoe!

Ironically, Zoe is so obsessed with discovering who caused Intrepid's injury that she fears she is turning into a bully herself.

The Intrepid Pony takes readers on a wonderful journey, ranging from gentleness to raw aggression, and I greatly enjoyed editing it. Lynne provides an intriguing story line that paints great pictures with vivid descriptions - plus plenty of emotion, intrigue, twists and turns.

Lynne Hale's well written book should greatly appeal not just to schoolgirls but to people of all ages. It is an excellent read!

Tony Flood, editor of My Life With The Stars and The Secret Potion and co-author of Twists in the Tales (www.celebritiesconfessions.com and www.fantasyadventurebooks.com).